I feel like this would have come across far better if the content wasn't so heavy-handed, more true to tone. Too little credit is given to the reader. By peppering the message from Burns with such blatant corporate messaging, the whimsy that they were attempting to achieve is lost.
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I feel like this would have come across far better if the content wasn't so heavy-handed, more true to tone.
Too little credit is given to the reader. By peppering the message from Burns with such blatant corporate messaging, the whimsy that they were attempting to achieve is lost.
Good idea-bad execution.
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